It's ok.

nice...

So does the "share this" thing put it on the front page then?

I like the hair.
I don't know the character so I can't say much.

No offense but thats not that good but considering you rushed it..
I'd like to see one that you take your time on

Is it something that is only if you have made so many flash or won awards or am I just missing something.

Does this mean you are going to try and make your own Hentai?

Drawing class haha. In England we call it Art which contains many different aspects, rather than just drawing, which sounds like a lesson for uneducated people, and it is not a very important subject.

Very nice.

All i have to say it add some shading.

Unless it's there and i can't see it.

Some things you should improve:
1) There's something wrong with the Neck, It's not symmetric enough and her shoulders need to be a little more broad.
2) The ear should normally starts at the bottom line of the nose and goes up to the eyebrows.

All in all it's quite good, I really like the hair. Just keep drawing and you will be as good as the guy who originally drew her (don't want to google that guy right now) in no time...

You should make your own Hentai, be like the Zone person, you will get your cock sucked by every underage user.

Also it is not your contry, surely you are at the age to choose your own subjects, and you took drawing.

Ah. Well overall, i think it's good.

But as you said, you rushed the hair.

But i would like to see a full, thought out hairstyle on a character like so.

Communist

its kind ugly, you have some problems with the size and position of things. the face looks like its like this / / and the ear is too high on the head... the hair is sexy tho

i think you're being awfully presumptuous with the "in my country" stuff. you can't pick your classes, but that doesn't mean that EVERYONE in the U.S. can't either.

as evidence, i present myself. :D

Please I am in the SS

Oh yea, I have seen that image actually. Now that you linked it up there.

awesome picture.

Should've drawn a character from an anime that isn't shit.

whoever said elfen is shit deserves to be poo'd in the mouth
pictures okay, bit blocky in the jaw

It has a nice touch to it which I like, nothing bold except for the half mask, but the other half takes it and makes it gentle, can't explain well, but I like it.

Wow, 12th comment on a single news post, I am looking like you.

i enjoy all yourgames and stuff, i thought you should know i respect the fact you reply to every comment, its very noble of you sir.

haha, the irony if this isnt replied to is immense.

nice man, um.. only thing i have to say is something looks off about the top of the helmet where its broken. I dunno, maybe it's just me, nothing big to worry about. But keep up the good work.

wow thats good!....i cant draw worth a crap.

I love all the people who suck up for wanting more Hentai, it is good, ishould bother to get into projects as well.

Use Yaoi in the next chapter.

I wonder how long you are going to stay mad at me deleting rap from my profile?

I DARE YOU NOT TO MAKE A REPLY TO THIS COMMENT

hmm. not bad dude. there are some proportional errors here and there, but that'll pass in time as long as you keep practicing. darn it, now this makes me want to draw her too... i guess i'll jump on it next time i have the chance. yes, i'll do both the long-haired and short-haired versions of Lucy. again, curse you for making me suddenly want to draw her.

wait...you've watched Elfen Lied too? Awesome.

I am a bad drawer. but im good at coloring outside the lines :D

Although this looks pretty good for a rushed attempt, I just have a few critisicms. First off, her horn looks funky. It looks like the left edge is hanging off into space above her ear. Also, her right cheek is boxier than the left one, encased in the helmet. Other than that, pretty good. Better than I could ever do.

Very VERY nice! :D lol i love her show, so bloody

Not bad kiddo, but ya still need some practice.

This will help you a lot. ^^
http://www.scribd.com/doc/47171/How-T o-Draw-Manga-Techniques-For-Drawing-F emale-Manga-Characters

I fun goal is to try to draw one full body character a week. Don't be afriad to take extra times on bits.

lol If I wasn't a flash artist I'd probably either be a garbage man or a manga artist. XD

crap and looks nothing like the character.
learn to draw before drawing anime.

She's fatter than the Lucy I've seen, but this is really good!
Better than what I can do

good work. that was a good anime series I should rewatch it.

Its not bad :o

At first glance I'd say it looks like half a female version of the man in the iron mask, but that's just me.

good drawing (better than anything i can draw) and i love elfin lied! its my fav anime
all i can recomend is that u
-make the face a bit longer or thiner and dont do both
-and make the horn longer and more sideways than diagnal

Bastards, Deus Ex still has not come, that should have been here on Monday nad it looks like I have to wait till Wednesday : (

GREAT!! ROCK ON!!! ELFEN LIED IS FUCKING SPACED AWESOME!!!
Glad there manny more Elfen lied fan like me

You sould make a Elfen Lied flash parody :)

Like Ragnarokia said, I'm not familiar with her so I can't say much but it looks good.

Uhm.... The shapes of things are kinda off...

Your display picture is awesome.

How about Guyver maybe :P, Although Elfen Lied and Lucy do both own as they are, But I don't see many Guyvers pics being made sadly.

Dude your "NAKED" style ROCKS !

It's actually quite good.

its ok, but u still got a lot to learn =P i recomend ya buy some drawing books and practice its techniques they help and lol elfen lied is my favourite anime XP and erm i noticed u erm like too much naked anime girls >.>

Nice drawing.

it's alright, but would she be smiling?

Infact the best drawing I have ever seen.

But then I realised it is not a drawing.

It's just crap.

Could you unblock me, childish arguement will never cease unless you do, and I'm on here a lot now. do us both a favour.

What a poor come back, go and fap to your Hentai.

Hey you know what, since u rushed, its not too bad. And as u said, there is shading but camera didnt pick it up, so it probably is better than the way it looks here.
Also u have very good taste in anime and I have seen an original done by one of the actual artists with lucy in the same pose, i think u saw that too and tried to draw it.
The hair actually isnt too bad.
Actually, one of the probs which I also have myself is that the image is only 2D. Maybe u intended on it to be that way but it isnt as flareful and appeasing to the eye when it lacks depth and fullness. Try to make it look like it has layers or space in it and it will look awesome.
Your not bad, and as u said this was rushed, some of my drawings that I take time on are same quality as this one, so your a better drawer than myself!
Keep it up!

yeah the graphics in 2 was need to be upgraded like getting more health and the boss could uses some work but every else is fine but that ok and your welcome fore 1 after all i am getting a job in game testing lol

get off the front page you worthless pile of shit

oh and you can't draw either

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The neck needs redrawing as well as the way the shirt is lying on her neck, but that could be done purposefully if she's wearing an overly large shirt. Also the fringe is too short, unless that's how the character has it, but I think it would do more justice to the rest of the hair if longer.

not bad for a pic.

Saying things like "and you are?" just proves my point that you are a 15 year old arrogant cunt. You say things like "grow up". How hypocritical.

So here's your fucking reminder:
http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/8 63062

Flowers.

Is this from an anime? Also u draw preety good. Its preety close to the original. yet the neck needs to be a bit fixed.

Flowers.

Also, that's a nice-Flowers.

I assure you, I'm know more women than you could ever dream in your 15 year old fap happy mind. Stick to your shitty drawings.

If you like you can stop by my Bebo homepage. Which proves that I am better than you in everyway.

http://www.bebo.com/IS-Dustin

Thought so!

Guns.

And Roses.

You know, you're really only famous for making porn...

And stealing the Liru picture from my profile.

Letting the fame get to your head.

And not talking to me anymore.

Its pretty nice>
Try to add some lining,and a bit of shadow effects lol.
Even though you rushed it,Id say its good!
But the things I stated above,you can do them very quickly though.
But nice drawing. :D

"Hey! You where the one that said 'All the cool kids are doing it' D,= D,= D,= D,="

Well that doesn't mean make a flash and not include me even though I contributed to nothing!

Well...Didn't I motivate you?

Well fine!

I never loved you anyways!

I love you.

that just a little tip lol so don't get offend or any thing dude lol but nice job tho keep up you work and don't listen to pepole some times there idiot that just like to say stupid shit try to piss you off there nothing but bugs lol

Is that Lucy / Nyu from Elfen Lied?
Tis alright. Not award winning. You just need to keep working on your style, which I hope it is not completely manga.

Well, you really don't have to answer my last comment, because I just saw the title of your post.

The neck, ear, and helmet details are the only problem I can see.

I guess you just-Flowers.

I have a comment competition on my userpage. : )

Nice picture- but YOU suck ass.

A countries flag shouldn't be spammed by a hentaifag.

I'm just glad I saw elfin lied before I saw this, nice going dude

I know Jack-shit about drawin', so I'll say it was....OK. Maybe...I dunno, I had to much whiskey....poor me....yeah....Oh well. Have a nice night/day/noon. :)

what happend to all the hentai posts you made?

<not that i look a them>

Make me a sammich.

Dude ... It haves no link with ure drawing (it's rly nice btw) but u shouldn't tell ure age when ure submiting so much hentai things! just an advice cuz ure things are great!!

I art highest to teh extremes

can i ask?? what is that anime on the middle?? the angel dressed as a maid??

can i ask?? what is that anime on the middle?? the angel dressed as a maid??