Score: 7

"3/5, 7/10"

submission: Pot Head Bob and a gennie

date: January 22, 2008

Pros:
1. Humor: The movie was a bit funny. I laughed at the "Forgot about gravity" Part
2. Animation: Animation was average. Still needs work
3. Graphics: Graphics are a lot better than a lot of flashes out there but still need work. Above average

Cons:
1. No preloader. I had to minimize the movie and take off my headphones so the movie finished loading without having to spoil anything.
2. Voice Acting: Needs improvement. If you need help, I think there's a voice acting club in the clubs and crews forum.
3. Sounds: Sounds need to be a lot better and clearer. There are quite a few good sites that provide free sounds. Check the audio forum for more info.

I Recommend:
1. Add a preloader so people with slow internet can watch the movie properly without any unnecessary pauses.
2. Get better sounds. Also you might want to add a sound when the guy gets squished by the cow.

Overall good job. If this is your first, you have some talent and should make more.

*~*~Review Request Club~*~*

Score: 10

"5/5, 10/10, faved"

submission: Sonny

date: January 20, 2008

I've been playing this game for a while and it's the best flash game I've played. Here's my review on it.

Pros:
1. Graphics: Graphics where very nice. Good colors and good looking equipment
2. Sounds: Sounds where truly amazing. Did you make them yourself?
3. Plot: Quite interesting plot. Really liked how ummm... that guy that talks to you at the beginning dies.
4. Voice Acting: Pretty nice voice acting. Good job

Cons:
1. Humor: I wasn't expecting humor in this type of game. I would really like to see less humor if you make another one

I Recommend:
1. The bottom part of the screen (where the blue circle is) looks empty and ugly. I think it would be better if you put in a miniature picture of the face of the people that are in the battle. (Sonny's face, Veradux's face, etc) This way, it doesn't look so empty.
2. When the characters jumped back, they still had the same animation as when they where jumping forward. Next time try to make it look like they where actually jumping back and not being pulled.
3. I was going to say more but I see you already know about them. (AI control, etc)

Great game I really enjoyed playing it. I'm currently at the third boss in the Illusions place. Good luck on future games.

Score: 6

"2/5, 6/10"

submission: How to review?

date: January 20, 2008

Not that good of a tutorial. Here's what I think of it

Pros:
1. You thought of an original tut. From my time on Newgrounds, I haven't seen a single reviewing tutorial. Nice job on originality.
2. I liked how the pages faded in/out and it didn't just jump to the next page.

Cons:
1. No pause button. This is bad to include in a tutorial because if I'm reading a tutorial which is supposed to make me learn, I don't want to be listening to music.
2. You didn't explain WHY reviews are helpful. You only explained how to make a review. If I where a new member reading this, I would be thinking "What is the point of reviewing other than increasing my review count?" If you said this, I probably missed it and I apologize.
3. You didn't show examples of a good review. You just put what not to do. You should have made examples so people see the difference between a crappy and a good, useful review.

I recommend:
1. Pause button. You really need a pause button. Had to take off my earphones to finish reading the tut.
2. Explain why reviews are helpful. You could explain them like this: 'Reviews are helpful to the author so that he/she can improve their work and make it better. If the review is positive and it doesn't provide any criticism, then it means that the author should keep up what he/she is doing but be sure to indicate the things that you liked so the author knows.'
3. Make a few good examples of how to review properly instead of giving tips.

That's all. Average tutorial. I think you could have explained more tho. With a little more work put into this, you could have a pretty nice tutorial. Good luck if you make more

Score: 9

"4/5 9/10"

submission: Bahamut's Newgrounds

date: January 20, 2008

I'm not a fan of the "My Newgrounds" thing but, as requested, I'll review this.

Pros:
1. I liked how you didn't record yourself explaining the stuff and you actually drew out everything.
2. Graphics: The drawings where pretty nice. Good job on those
3. Animation: Nice job with the animation. Things moved very smoothly

Cons:
*None*

I recommend:
*Nothing*

Eh, Sorry for the short review It's just that I'm not good with reviewing "My Newgrounds" stuff. Anyways, nice movie.

*~*~Review Request Club~*~*

Score: 10

"5/5, 10/10, faved"

submission: Project Inthri 3

date: January 19, 2008

Great game I really enjoyed it. Here's my review on it

Pros:
1. Graphics: Graphics where very nice and you put in some detail on the ships
2. Sounds: Very nice sounds tho I recommend you make the sound of the ships firing their guns higher. I could barely hear it
3. Music: Very nice music selection. They fit perfectly into every stage/boss
4. Voice Acting: Very good voice acting.
5. Nice job with the co-op mode. I liked playing it by myself with 2 ships
6. I liked the part where you had to fight the girl in the yellow ship. I knew there was going to be some sort of betrayal thing.
7. Background: I loved how the background changed and it wasn't always the same picture.

Cons:
1. No pause button. I would really like to see one next time

I recommend:
1. Make a pause button. I really recommend you add one because if I had to go to the bathroom and I had already gone pretty far in a stage/boss, I wouldn't have to replay all of it.

That's all. I really enjoyed this game. Kinda reminded me of Starfox or whatever.
Good job on Daily 2. Will there be a sequel?

Score: 3

"2/5, 3/10"

submission: Hentai 50

date: January 17, 2008

Being an ex-gallery maker myself, I won't rate this just because it's a gallery just on how well you used the images and their quality.

Pros:
1. Enough lolicon for me I guess.

Cons:
1. Quality: The quality of the images where very low. It looked like you resized them with flash. I really recommend you get photoshop and resize the images with photoshop. You will get much better quality.
2. Music: Horrible selection. You should not use music if you're making a gallery it just ruins everything. At least you added a pause button
3. The text between the pics was very annoying. Next time take it off and I'm sure your score will go up.
4. Take off the logo of where you get your pics from. This ruins everything because people will know where you get them from and will stop looking at your stuff.

I recommend:
1. Index: Make an index. This way, if a person wants to see all their favorite image, they don't have to skip all the other images.
2. Gifs: They might be worth a huge file size but will provide a way better score.
3. Take off the logo from where you get your pics from.
4. Compress the game. This was not worth the huge file size

That's all I can think of right now. I don't know if you're actually a new user to Newgrounds but if you are, welcome.

If you make another one of these, good luck and remember to read all reviews so you know what to do and get a better score next time.

Score: 10

"5/5, 10/10, faved"

submission: Rebecca

date: January 12, 2008

Awesome movie. Here's what I think of it

Pros:
1. Graphics: Very very nice graphics. You're very good at drawing. Nice job.
2. Animation: The animation was nice and smooth. Great job on it.
3. Voice Acting: Very very nice voice acting. Did you act those out yourself?
4. Humor: Very funny movie. I was laughing through the whole thing.
5. Sounds: Sounds effects where very nice. Did you make them?
6. I loved the "Did you, did you put her in her last night?" God that was funny.

Cons:
1. The movie was way to short. If you would have added a few extra parts, it would have been great.

I Recommend:
*Nothing*

Awesome movie. Like I said, I was laughing though the whole thing. *Added to favorites*

Score: 10

"5/5 - 10/10, Faved"

submission: Gamer Tonight - RTS Gamer

date: January 11, 2008

Awesome movie. Here's what I think of it

Pros:
1. Graphics: Very nice graphics they fit very well with the movie. Very nice job.
2. Lip Sync: Lip Sync was very nice. Al tho I don't really pay much attention to it, you did a nice job.
3. Humor: The movie is very funny. Hell I was laughing through the whole thing. This is the best one of the series.
4. Voice Acting: VA was perfect. Egoraptor is a very nice voice actor. Nice job!
5. I loved the part where Tim was reading the letter he had and the last part. Those two parts where the best of the episode.
6. Animation: The animation was pretty nice. The characters moved smoothly.

Cons:
*None*

I Recommend:
1. I think you should have mentioned rushing in the movie. I think it would have been a good idea.

That's all. I really enjoyed this movie. Like I said, this is the best one of all of them. I would really like seeing a 'Battlefield' episode. Anyways, very nice movie.

RTS FTW!

Score: 10

"*None*"

submission: Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 141

date: January 3, 2008

This is the funniest one I've seen. Here's my opinion on it

Pros:
1. Humor: Like I said, I found this one funnier than the rest. Maybe because of the outfit you drew for Hitler.
2. Music: I love the opening song tho this episode's main song could have been a bit better. Nice selection tho.
3. Graphics: The graphics are very nice. They are not pixely and are very well cut. The background is not bad either.

Cons:
1. There's not animation just a simple picture. (Except for the evolution part) That's a small con. You should add a little animation to the background.
2. Hitler's top or right arm could do with a bit more of work.

I Recommend:
1. Add a bit more of animation to the background picture. This can be pretty simple. Just take this ocean background for example. You could add a school of fish passing by or another Pokemon (maybe the stage before of the Pokemon that just evolved or another Pokemon that goes with the background) You could also use different things for different background. (Like birds for plains, mountains, etc)
2. To make the flash a bit more humorous (spelling) you could have made Kabutops look like if he where standing ontop of the turtle. IMO, that would have made it a bit more random and funnier

That's all. Like I said, this is ojne of the funniest one I've seen in the series. Keep it up.

Score: 10

"Awesome"

submission: PALADIN: the Game

date: December 23, 2007

At first, I thought this game would be like the one of Artix or w.e. I was wrong. Here's what I think of this game:

Pros:
1. Graphics: Graphics where great. Nice job
2. Plot: Plot was interesting but a bit unoriginal (I'm not saying it's stolen what I mean is that there's lots of games with almost the same plot) still good tho.
3. Gameplay: The gameplay was great. It had me hooked for quite a while.
4. Voice Acting: The voice acting was pretty good. Great job on it
5. I liked the different amount of spells but a lot of them where useless. (Like fly, turn undead, and judgement which was very inacurate)

Cons:
1. Length: The game was WAY to short. You should have added 2 - 3 more missions or have made a "survival" mode. That way, people that have passed the game numerous times could do something else other than beat it again and again.
2. You should add random appearing potions around in boss fights. That way, the player doesn't have to run left and right or jump up and down trying to regenerate HP and/or mana.

That's it. Awesome game defenantly entertaining. I really hope you add a survival mode for people that have passed it numerous times. Great job