Score: 4

"2/5, 4/10"

submission: Mixed hentai quiz 4!

date: April 8, 2008

Below average hentai quiz. Here's what I think of it.

Pros:
1. Music: Music was fun to listen to but not just the type of song you would use for a quiz.

Cons:
1. Music: Music didn't loop.
2. Pictures: Pictures where bad. Here are the reasons:
a) Low quality. Looks like you resized them in Flash
b) Generally not arousing. Only 1 of the images aroused me a bit which was #2
c) Low resolution. Try making the images fill the whole screen. It will be a lot more appealing.
3. Put in more images. Nobody will like 10 images on a 3.6 MB quiz.
4. Buttons: Bad. Mainly because of the colors and size. Try making buttons smaller and better looking. Also, add some transparency into them if they don't look that good.
5. Links on images: Very bad for you. Try to remove them or get images with no links. If people can read them, they will know where you get your pics from and won't play your games anymore.

I Recommend:
1. After the Kim Possible question, you should have put Kim Possible hentai for us regulars to lul.
2. Add a 'replay' button in the gallery section. You never know when somebody would want to replay the quiz.
3. Add better pictures. High quality and resolution are best. Also, get pictures that are more arousing.

That's all for my review. Sorry for the possible wall of text but I think you might find it useful for your next one.

Score: 6

"2/5, 6/10"

submission: Alert! Monsters At 5:23!

date: February 22, 2008

Movie was alright. Still needs a bit of improvement. Here's my opinion on it.

Pros:
1. Humor: A bit funny but needs some of improvement.
2. Animation: Animation was alright.
3. Plot: Plot was alright.

Cons:
1. Voice acting: Horrible. Needs lots of improvements. There is a Voice acting club around Newgrounds if you need help.
2. Graphics: Graphics where below average. They need improvement. Some of the stuff (like the arms) where sticks.

I Recommend:
1. Improve your voice acting. It could be hard but way worth it.

That's all. The movie was alright. Just needs some improvements and it could be good.

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Score: 8

"4/5, 8/10"

submission: Cow in Submarine

date: February 22, 2008

Movie was alright. Here's my opinion on it:

Pros:
1. Graphics: Graphics where nice. Good job on them
2. Animation: Alright animation.
3. Music: Nice selection of music. Great selection
4. Sound: The sounds you used where pretty good and clear. Nice job on them.
5. I loved the Nazi submarine.
6. Humor: The movie was pretty funny. Nice job

Cons:
1. It was too short. Make it a bit longer.

I Recommend:
1. Make it a bit longer and with a small plot. It will make it better.

That's all for my review. You should make it a bit longer. Anyways, it was pretty good.

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Score: 10

"5/5, 10/10"

submission: Congé.

date: February 19, 2008

Pretty good movie. Here's my opinion on it.

Pros:
1. The movie was very random so it was that was cool.
2. Graphics: The drawings where quite nice and they went with the movie.
3. Animation: Animation was pretty good. Nice job
4. Music: Loved the music. Great selection.
5. Sounds: Nice sounds.

Cons:
*None*

I Recommend:
*Nothing*

It was a pretty good movie. I loved the rewind part. Great job

Score: 10

"5/5, 10/10"

submission: The Narrator's Love Story

date: February 14, 2008

Great, funny movie. Here's my review on it.

Pros:
1. Humor: Very funny movie. Most of the things where funny.
2. Graphics: Graphics weren't bad. Loved the eyes reflecting lights thing.
3. Voice Acting: Great voice acting.

Cons:
*None*

I Recommend:
*Nothing*

Like I said, this was a great, funny movie. I loved the cat part.

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Score: 6

"2/5, 6/10"

submission: Droids Vs Aliens

date: February 10, 2008

It was alright. Needs improvement tho.

Pros:
1. I liked the different ways they killed each other.

Cons:
1. The characters just 'died' you should have drawn small gunshots and blood each time a character died. This way, it would look better.
2. Sounds: The sounds where a bit screechy. Decrease the volume on some.
3. Too short to be entertaining.

I recommend:
1. Make it longer. This way, it's more entertaining
2. Make blood and gunshots animation. It will look more professional and better this way.

Anyways, it was alright. Could be better tho.

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Score: 8

"4/5, 8/10"

submission: Windows Errors 2007

date: February 6, 2008

Not bad. Pretty funny actually. Here's what I think of it.

Pros:
1. Music: Music was alright. Not a bad selection.
2. Some of the errors where actually quite funny. Not all of them tho.

Cons:
1. Buttons could have been easier to press. Make them with a transparent background so it's easier to click.
2. It's just image after image. You should add a 'Fade in', 'Fade out' effect. This will make it look better.

I recommend:
1. Make buttons with transparent background so they are easier to click.

That's all. Anyways, nice submition. Make another one! ;P

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Score: 8

"4/5, 8/10"

submission: Another Hentai Quiz 2

date: February 6, 2008

First off, sorry for being late. My internet was out for 2 and a half days. Anyways, here's my review on the quiz.

Pros:
1. Quality: The image quality of the quiz was alright.
2. Ending video was great. Nice job.
3. Sounds where alright but could be better

Cons:
1. Image Size: Image size was bad. In my opinion, you should get photoshop and resize the images so that it looks better and add hotkeys so the image is not interrupted by the buttons
2. Questions: The questions where about Family Guy. You should add questions from the world and all that stuff because if a person doesn't watch Family Guy, he would not know what to answer.
3. Heavily Censored Images. Get images with a bit less of censoring.

I Recommend:
1. Increase the images size and make buttons with alpha or hotkeys.
2. Get better questions of stuff everybody could know. (Math, Science, Geography, etc)

That's all. Great quiz and thanks for telling me on how to add videos to flash ^___^

Score: 10

"5/5 10/10"

submission: The Final Dare

date: February 2, 2008

Great game. To short tho. Here's what I think of it.

Pros:
1. Effects: The lighting effects where really nice. I really like them nice job.
2. Music: Very nice selection of music
3. Script: Nice script. I really enjoyed reading it.
4. Preloader: Very nice preloader.
5. Font: Truly stunning font. Nice selection

Cons:
1. Way to short.
2. Graphics: Picture quality could have been better.

I Recommend:
1. Make it a bit longer.
2. Make the next button with a bit of transparent background. This way, viewers don't have to actually click the button. (They could just click a few pixels beside it)

That's all. Very nice art and a great read. I didn't find any bugs or anything like that. Anyways, great submition. Will there be another one?

Score: 7

"3/5, 7/10"

submission: Pot Head Bob and a gennie

date: January 22, 2008

Pros:
1. Humor: The movie was a bit funny. I laughed at the "Forgot about gravity" Part
2. Animation: Animation was average. Still needs work
3. Graphics: Graphics are a lot better than a lot of flashes out there but still need work. Above average

Cons:
1. No preloader. I had to minimize the movie and take off my headphones so the movie finished loading without having to spoil anything.
2. Voice Acting: Needs improvement. If you need help, I think there's a voice acting club in the clubs and crews forum.
3. Sounds: Sounds need to be a lot better and clearer. There are quite a few good sites that provide free sounds. Check the audio forum for more info.

I Recommend:
1. Add a preloader so people with slow internet can watch the movie properly without any unnecessary pauses.
2. Get better sounds. Also you might want to add a sound when the guy gets squished by the cow.

Overall good job. If this is your first, you have some talent and should make more.

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