Phantox's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hipster Walk Cycle]

Pretty Good

I don't know how this got TotW. It's a boring and simple but the animation is smooth and the drawings are great.

The bad thing is that it has no background and the left arm moves with the left leg and vice versa and not left leg with right arm and right leg with left arm.

Overall, if you add a moving background and fix the arms and legs, it would be pretty good. This is a lot better than a lot of the stuff that gets through the portal of people "beginning flash" or "posting my son's stick fight"

[Left 4 Dead 11-11-11]

Needs improvement

There's not much story to it but the background is nice. The sounds need to be a bit higher quality and you could of animated the vomit and blood splatter of the boomer instead of just making it a still frame for a few seconds. You should also animate the infected falling when they die instead of standing in one frame and then being "on the floor" the next frame.

Flash could have been a lot better if you would have taken the time to animate it more.

[By The Way]

10/10 For The Story

At first, this flash is pretty boring. It starts getting better and better. I thought that the couple were late for a war movie they were watching, then I thought that the flash was about how people are living the good life while we have service men dying in wars, and then I understood what it really was about.

Anyways, the thing I didn't like about this flash was that there were too many motion tweens. I think the whole animation was composed of motion tweens. The drawings were good and it's the first time I saw a digital clock in a clock animation.

Overall, it's a good flash animation that starts out a little slow and has a bit too many motion tweens

[COGS OF WAR 2]

5/5 10/10, faved

Great film really liked it. Here's what I think of it:

Pros:
1. Graphics: Graphics where very nice. I really like how the Lancer looks.
2. Voice Acting: The voices where pretty good. They fit well with the humor.
3. Humor: The movie was very funny. I laughed at most of the parts especially the "Under... the water" part.
4. Plot: Well it didn't really have a plot but you did good in imitating what happens in the actual game.
5. Lip Sync: The lip sync wasn't perfect but it was still good. Nice job on it

Cons:
*None*

I Recommend:
*Nothing*

Overall, it was pretty good. Had a good laugh when I watched it. I hope to see more.

[Sugar, Spice and...]

5/5, 9/10, faved

Not a bad movie. Here's my opinion on it:

Pros:
1. Graphics: Graphics where very nice. Very good job on them.
2. Animation: Great animation. Went very well with the music.
3. Voice Acting: Nice voice acting. Did you act them out yourself?
4. Lip Sync: Very nice lip sync. Very good job.

Cons:
1. Preloader: Preloader doesn't show a bar AND it starts automatically. If I had to go to the bathroom, or to the kitchen when the movie starts, I would have missed most of it.
2. Ending: Ending could have been better.

I Recommend:
1. Make the preloader start the movie when the person that's watching the movie presses a button. This way, the person that's watching it doesn't miss the beginning and get spoilers.
2. Make a better ending.
3. I read that you where going to add a part where the big sister shoots the other girl. You should make it and add it to the movie and at the end, give the option to watch that part. It sounds interesting.

Well that's all. Very nice video and very funny. Keep it up!

[Fat, bald soccer player]

4/5, 9/10

Pretty good movie. Here's what I think of it

Pros:
1. Graphics: Graphics where pretty good.
2. Music: Nice selection of music. It went pretty well with the movie.
3. Humor: The movie was pretty funny. Great job
4. Sounds: Sounds where nice. Good job on them.

Cons:
1. Animation: The animation could do with some improvement. It looked like you skipped some frames.
2. Backgrounds: Backgrounds where not so bad but they still need some work.

I Recommend:
1. Work a bit more on backgrounds.

That's all. Anyways, great movie. It was pretty funny. Nice job.

*~Review Request Club~*

[Alert! Monsters At 5:23!]

2/5, 6/10

Movie was alright. Still needs a bit of improvement. Here's my opinion on it.

Pros:
1. Humor: A bit funny but needs some of improvement.
2. Animation: Animation was alright.
3. Plot: Plot was alright.

Cons:
1. Voice acting: Horrible. Needs lots of improvements. There is a Voice acting club around Newgrounds if you need help.
2. Graphics: Graphics where below average. They need improvement. Some of the stuff (like the arms) where sticks.

I Recommend:
1. Improve your voice acting. It could be hard but way worth it.

That's all. The movie was alright. Just needs some improvements and it could be good.

*~Review Request Club~*

Ying-yong responds:

I'll take it. Thanks

[Cow in Submarine]

4/5, 8/10

Movie was alright. Here's my opinion on it:

Pros:
1. Graphics: Graphics where nice. Good job on them
2. Animation: Alright animation.
3. Music: Nice selection of music. Great selection
4. Sound: The sounds you used where pretty good and clear. Nice job on them.
5. I loved the Nazi submarine.
6. Humor: The movie was pretty funny. Nice job

Cons:
1. It was too short. Make it a bit longer.

I Recommend:
1. Make it a bit longer and with a small plot. It will make it better.

That's all for my review. You should make it a bit longer. Anyways, it was pretty good.

*~Review Request Club~*

Imacow responds:

Thanks, it was just meant to be a short.

[Congé.]

5/5, 10/10

Pretty good movie. Here's my opinion on it.

Pros:
1. The movie was very random so it was that was cool.
2. Graphics: The drawings where quite nice and they went with the movie.
3. Animation: Animation was pretty good. Nice job
4. Music: Loved the music. Great selection.
5. Sounds: Nice sounds.

Cons:
*None*

I Recommend:
*Nothing*

It was a pretty good movie. I loved the rewind part. Great job

Mechabloby responds:

Ha ha, cool. Nothing I could improve? Brilliant! :)

[The Narrator's Love Story]

5/5, 10/10

Great, funny movie. Here's my review on it.

Pros:
1. Humor: Very funny movie. Most of the things where funny.
2. Graphics: Graphics weren't bad. Loved the eyes reflecting lights thing.
3. Voice Acting: Great voice acting.

Cons:
*None*

I Recommend:
*Nothing*

Like I said, this was a great, funny movie. I loved the cat part.

*~Review Request Club~*

PostTimeskipSam responds:

Thanks, I am pretty sure there are a few cons, but thanks and it seems for some reason the cat part is one of the favorite parts according to my friend.