I really like this song. The lyrics make it a lot better although some of the lyrics seem off.
I would replace these lyrics:
"Go to sleep my child" with "Go sleep my child"
"Sail all the wondrous seas" with "Sail all the seven seas"
"I'm here by your side" with "I'm here by you"
I think those lyrics would have better flow. Either way, great job.
Hmmm... I probably wouldn't change them. I kept it as "wondrous seas" to fit with Windwaker (there's only the Great Sea in that one. ) As for the others, I needed the syllables XD
But I appreciate the feedback!
5/5, 10/10, faved, downloaded
I'm not much of an audio reviewer but here I go.
It's a very nice song. Great lyrics and very catchy. One of my favorites. Nice job on the piano.
I could sometimes hear you taking deep breaths while singing. Some where hard to hear but some where very loud. Another thing is that on some the lyrics you would say "Tink"
Overall, great song. IMO, deserves #1 BotW.
Sorry if you didn't find this helpful... I'm not an expert audio reviewer ^__^'
than heaps, i actually like to hear a bit of breathing in a song though, keeps things less robotic.... but i guess thats up to personal opinion!
and thank you
Nice song. Here's what I think of it
The song had a nice little tune. It kinda reminded me of MS or Mario or one of those games. It had a great beat and it wasn't repetitive in my opinion.
You also made a very nice loop. Barely noticed it looping.
Nice song overall. Great job on it
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Thanks for the compliment.
I don't want to sound insulting but this is very bad for the following reasons
1. Sounds where awful
2. Some sounds would be WAY to loud. If I would of had a high volume my ears would be hurting very much.
I recommend you fix up the volume of the sounds and make better sounds. Nice job on the loop
Nice song. Here's what I think of it.
Had a catchy beat up to 30 made me tap my feet for a while. It started getting a bit repetitive a bit after that. Nice beat at 45 but played for most of the song with just the background changing.
Overall, good song. Nice job on it
Great song. I'm not much of an audio reviewer but I'll do my best.
The song starts very nicely slow and calm then it gets getting faster and better. The song is not repetitive at all nice job. The song is best at 1:16. The song ends very well and, if done correctly, has a great loop. It also has a sort of military theme to it.
The song goes best with:
RTS games, fast paced FPS games, and flying games. Especially at 1:16.
Goes worst with:
Slow paced FPS game.
That's all. Very nice job on the song. Good luck with future songs.
I'm not much of an audio reviewer but I'll try my best.
The song has a good beat and a catchy tune. It's very nice and it sounds like a sort of Halloween type of song. A bad thing is that it's very repetitive.
It's not bad at all but like I said, it's a bit too repetitive.
Anyways, that's all for my review... I'm not a very good audio reviewer so I'm sorry if this wasn't helpful...
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Well thanks for the review, it is helpful because I hadnt realized it was so repetitive, now I can hear it. So thanks for that, and feel free to review any other of my audio in the future. Thanks!
I'm not much of an audio reviewer but I'll do my best...
The song was very nice. It has a Christmas feel to it. A bit repetitive but I loved the beat that solos at 1:30.
The song is quite catchy and it has a "happy" feel to it. Anyways, nice job and like I said, I'm not much of an audio reviewer so sorry if you didn't find this helpful. Added to favs =P
Hey, thanks for the review.
What you wrote was good. A bit of critique, a bit of complement. About the repetitiveness of it: That was my primary concern, I added a few extra parts at the end to try and conceal it, and I probably could have done it better, but I'm still happy with it. 9/10 and another fav is enough to please me.
This song was great. I'm not much of an audio reviewer but here's what I think about the song:
The song is awesome. It starts perfectly and stays that way through out the whole 2:35. It's the best song I've ever heard. Downloaded and faved. 5 every day. Great job.
Also, this is the best song you've made, IMO.
This song is awesome I love it! Nice job.
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