Phantox's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hitman's job]

Not good

Not that good of a movie. Here's what I think of it.

Pros:
1. Background: The background looked OK. Not that bad.
2. Blood: The blood animation was alright.

Cons:
1. Plot: The plot is unoriginal there are tons of hitman movies out there with the exact same plot. I recommend you make something more creative.
2. Graphics: The graphics where bad. The guns looked like they where Googled. I recommend making better, 3d looking images.
3. Music: The music was bad for the movie. It didn't go with it at all.
4. Animation: The characters didn't move smoothly. They almost looked like robots moving. I recommend you work on animation a bit more.
5. The movie itself was boring. I was asking myself "When is it going to end?" I recommend you make it funner to watch and with an interesting plot to make it a good movie.

That's all. If you really want to make good movies, I recommend you work on plot, and animation. Also, you should use better music for the next movie. If you make another one, good luck.

sam-delitans responds:

For the background, i agree with you.
For the blood, i think i can do better.
For the plot, i somewhat dont agree with you.
For the graphics, i agree with you.
For the music, i strictly dont agree with u, i put in quite a lot of effort just for the animation to go with the music, maybe u should watched it again..
For the animation, i agree and dont agree with u, at least some of the fighting were smooth enough to see..
For the movie itself, i can say the first part was boring but after the guy meet more enemies, i wont say its boring, i also recommend you to appreciate crappy and stop comparing noob's work to a pro's work.
but i may take your advise overall, thanks

[Sherlock Holmes Christmas]

Great!

Great movie you got there. Here's what I think of it:

Pros:
1. Graphics: Graphics where very nice. I really liked them. Good job on that.
2. Voice Acting: Voice acting was great. Very very good on that.
3. Plot: Plot was interesting. I really liked it.
4. Humor: The movie had some very funny parts. Nice job

Cons:
1. No scene select. This is a long movie so I really recommend you put one in. It's useful because if someone wants to go to their favorite part, they could just select it instead of having to go through the whole movie.

That's all. Really nice movie. I loved the plot.

Pigmash responds:

Thanks, and Ill try and learn how to do scene selection some time

[Scott and Duke ep.7]

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Not that good of a flash. Here's my opinion on it.

Pros:
1. Graphics: Graphics where alright. Not too good, not to bad either.

Cons:
1. Lip Sync: Lip Sync was horrible... I suggest you work on that a bit more.
2. Voice Acting: Voice acting was also very bad. Work on that a bit more too.
3. Humor: Horrible. I didn't laugh at all.
4. Plot: Some guys talking about going to the moon. Boring... Sorry.

That's all. I really suggest you work on lip sync, VA, and humor. The graphics are alright. If you need help on the lip sync, check out the tutorials section. They have some nice tutorials on LS there.

Linked responds:

I appreciate the constructive criticism! Although, if you look at more recent work you'd see that i've improved a lot.

[HALOMEN2]

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I'm disappointed a bit on this... I was expecting more from you. Here's my opinion on the flash:

Pros:
1. Graphics: Graphics are very nice. I like them a lot.
2. Plot: Plot was alright but I think it would have been better if you kept it just MC, Steve and the Captain.

Cons:
1. Humor: I didn't find this one as funny the last one. Well... not funny at all.
2. You should have made the Master Chief a bit more quiet like you did on the first one and not have made him talk without his helmet.
3. Some characters, such as the guy from Half-Life, had a very large head... Like 5x their body size. It would be better if you resized them a bit.

That's all. I was expecting this one to be a lot better than the first but Unfortunately it's not. If you make a #3, please make it better.

danomano65 responds:

You are 15. You have hentai all over your profile...
Please.

Reevaluate your position in the world before assessing my hardwork.

[Battle for the Mountain]

Not bad...

Nice movie. Here's my opinion on it:

The good:
1. Allot of violence and blood, which was great.
2. Sound effects where very nice. Not bad at all.
3. The randomness of it was great. Watching how the guys just killed each other in random different ways was funny.

The bad:
1. The missiles didn't move smoothly enough instead, they moved angled which didn't make it look good.
2. Some of the guys looked bigger/fatter than other guys. That made it look a bit weird.

Well thats all! Oh and one more thing... Is it just me or do the rocket launchers look like those in Halo?

fadedshadow responds:

i modeled them after the ones in halo

[Link's Theme Song]

Awsome!!

Hahaha that was great! I loved it is was funny and the drawings fit well. Nice job!

Graeme responds:

thanks man! glad see its on your favorites!

[Command & Conquer TE]

Great Movie

This was a great movie. Very funny. It reminds me of C&C Firestorm and Renegade. You and the people that helped you make this did a great job. I hope to see another one but based on the Generals and ZH ones.

Killerratte responds:

I will just tell myself i didn't read that last sentence ...