Phantox's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Alert! Monsters At 5:23!]

2/5, 6/10

Movie was alright. Still needs a bit of improvement. Here's my opinion on it.

Pros:
1. Humor: A bit funny but needs some of improvement.
2. Animation: Animation was alright.
3. Plot: Plot was alright.

Cons:
1. Voice acting: Horrible. Needs lots of improvements. There is a Voice acting club around Newgrounds if you need help.
2. Graphics: Graphics where below average. They need improvement. Some of the stuff (like the arms) where sticks.

I Recommend:
1. Improve your voice acting. It could be hard but way worth it.

That's all. The movie was alright. Just needs some improvements and it could be good.

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Ying-yong responds:

I'll take it. Thanks

[Cow in Submarine]

4/5, 8/10

Movie was alright. Here's my opinion on it:

Pros:
1. Graphics: Graphics where nice. Good job on them
2. Animation: Alright animation.
3. Music: Nice selection of music. Great selection
4. Sound: The sounds you used where pretty good and clear. Nice job on them.
5. I loved the Nazi submarine.
6. Humor: The movie was pretty funny. Nice job

Cons:
1. It was too short. Make it a bit longer.

I Recommend:
1. Make it a bit longer and with a small plot. It will make it better.

That's all for my review. You should make it a bit longer. Anyways, it was pretty good.

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Imacow responds:

Thanks, it was just meant to be a short.

[Congé.]

5/5, 10/10

Pretty good movie. Here's my opinion on it.

Pros:
1. The movie was very random so it was that was cool.
2. Graphics: The drawings where quite nice and they went with the movie.
3. Animation: Animation was pretty good. Nice job
4. Music: Loved the music. Great selection.
5. Sounds: Nice sounds.

Cons:
*None*

I Recommend:
*Nothing*

It was a pretty good movie. I loved the rewind part. Great job

Mechabloby responds:

Ha ha, cool. Nothing I could improve? Brilliant! :)

[The Narrator's Love Story]

5/5, 10/10

Great, funny movie. Here's my review on it.

Pros:
1. Humor: Very funny movie. Most of the things where funny.
2. Graphics: Graphics weren't bad. Loved the eyes reflecting lights thing.
3. Voice Acting: Great voice acting.

Cons:
*None*

I Recommend:
*Nothing*

Like I said, this was a great, funny movie. I loved the cat part.

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PostTimeskipSam responds:

Thanks, I am pretty sure there are a few cons, but thanks and it seems for some reason the cat part is one of the favorite parts according to my friend.

[Droids Vs Aliens]

2/5, 6/10

It was alright. Needs improvement tho.

Pros:
1. I liked the different ways they killed each other.

Cons:
1. The characters just 'died' you should have drawn small gunshots and blood each time a character died. This way, it would look better.
2. Sounds: The sounds where a bit screechy. Decrease the volume on some.
3. Too short to be entertaining.

I recommend:
1. Make it longer. This way, it's more entertaining
2. Make blood and gunshots animation. It will look more professional and better this way.

Anyways, it was alright. Could be better tho.

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Graeme responds:

The funny thing is, I actually imported it into flash, and tried to draw lazers and things into it. Just to make it more flashy. That's why I put off hosting it on Newgrounds in the first place.
I think now my flash skills are good enough that I would be able to add stuff like that in.
I'll agree with you, much to short. And sounds were pretty crappy at some parts.

Thanks for the review. You covered it very well, and pointed out everything that I to thought could use work

[Pot Head Bob and a gennie]

3/5, 7/10

Pros:
1. Humor: The movie was a bit funny. I laughed at the "Forgot about gravity" Part
2. Animation: Animation was average. Still needs work
3. Graphics: Graphics are a lot better than a lot of flashes out there but still need work. Above average

Cons:
1. No preloader. I had to minimize the movie and take off my headphones so the movie finished loading without having to spoil anything.
2. Voice Acting: Needs improvement. If you need help, I think there's a voice acting club in the clubs and crews forum.
3. Sounds: Sounds need to be a lot better and clearer. There are quite a few good sites that provide free sounds. Check the audio forum for more info.

I Recommend:
1. Add a preloader so people with slow internet can watch the movie properly without any unnecessary pauses.
2. Get better sounds. Also you might want to add a sound when the guy gets squished by the cow.

Overall good job. If this is your first, you have some talent and should make more.

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D3m0n1c707 responds:

Thanks, I found your review very, very helpful and informative. Thanks Alot!

[How to review?]

2/5, 6/10

Not that good of a tutorial. Here's what I think of it

Pros:
1. You thought of an original tut. From my time on Newgrounds, I haven't seen a single reviewing tutorial. Nice job on originality.
2. I liked how the pages faded in/out and it didn't just jump to the next page.

Cons:
1. No pause button. This is bad to include in a tutorial because if I'm reading a tutorial which is supposed to make me learn, I don't want to be listening to music.
2. You didn't explain WHY reviews are helpful. You only explained how to make a review. If I where a new member reading this, I would be thinking "What is the point of reviewing other than increasing my review count?" If you said this, I probably missed it and I apologize.
3. You didn't show examples of a good review. You just put what not to do. You should have made examples so people see the difference between a crappy and a good, useful review.

I recommend:
1. Pause button. You really need a pause button. Had to take off my earphones to finish reading the tut.
2. Explain why reviews are helpful. You could explain them like this: 'Reviews are helpful to the author so that he/she can improve their work and make it better. If the review is positive and it doesn't provide any criticism, then it means that the author should keep up what he/she is doing but be sure to indicate the things that you liked so the author knows.'
3. Make a few good examples of how to review properly instead of giving tips.

That's all. Average tutorial. I think you could have explained more tho. With a little more work put into this, you could have a pretty nice tutorial. Good luck if you make more

Pedropmp responds:

Thank you loads :)
Thanks to your amazing review I have some more points to correct, thanks again :)

[Bahamut's Newgrounds]

4/5 9/10

I'm not a fan of the "My Newgrounds" thing but, as requested, I'll review this.

Pros:
1. I liked how you didn't record yourself explaining the stuff and you actually drew out everything.
2. Graphics: The drawings where pretty nice. Good job on those
3. Animation: Nice job with the animation. Things moved very smoothly

Cons:
*None*

I recommend:
*Nothing*

Eh, Sorry for the short review It's just that I'm not good with reviewing "My Newgrounds" stuff. Anyways, nice movie.

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kinggila responds:

I thought the review was quite long. Certainly longer than an average user's reviews, so that's good. Thanks for reviewing Phantox. :)

[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 141]

*None*

This is the funniest one I've seen. Here's my opinion on it

Pros:
1. Humor: Like I said, I found this one funnier than the rest. Maybe because of the outfit you drew for Hitler.
2. Music: I love the opening song tho this episode's main song could have been a bit better. Nice selection tho.
3. Graphics: The graphics are very nice. They are not pixely and are very well cut. The background is not bad either.

Cons:
1. There's not animation just a simple picture. (Except for the evolution part) That's a small con. You should add a little animation to the background.
2. Hitler's top or right arm could do with a bit more of work.

I Recommend:
1. Add a bit more of animation to the background picture. This can be pretty simple. Just take this ocean background for example. You could add a school of fish passing by or another Pokemon (maybe the stage before of the Pokemon that just evolved or another Pokemon that goes with the background) You could also use different things for different background. (Like birds for plains, mountains, etc)
2. To make the flash a bit more humorous (spelling) you could have made Kabutops look like if he where standing ontop of the turtle. IMO, that would have made it a bit more random and funnier

That's all. Like I said, this is ojne of the funniest one I've seen in the series. Keep it up.

AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

I didn't draw anything.

[Shared joy is double joy]

Weird...

Weird movie. Here's what I think of it:

Pros:
1. Animation: Animation was alright. The characters moved smoothly.
2. Sounds: Sounds where alright.

Cons:
1. Plot: No plot at all... Or am I missing something?
2. The movie itself was gross... A guy ripping his tit off and giving it to another guy... Ugh...
3. Text went by a little fast. Slow readers would have a problem with the intro.

That's all. Like I said: Weird and gross movie. Anyways, good job on the animation. Graphics where alright but could use with some work.

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Pepeto responds:

Haha hah, thanks for the review :D
Yup, there's no planned plot or anything.
Yeah, should've made the text go slower, you're right about that..